Monster!

Here is my little monster~

Critique of Kirsten's photo

This is Kirsten's image. Clicking and un-clicking the layers of changes done, I must say the adjustments made are quite appropriate. I especially like how you were able to mute the light from the streetlamps above the street, so that the focus is on the lanes of lights. I also think that the lens blur and selective desaturation worked well to make the background more of a background, i.e. so that it doesn't draw focus away from the important parts of the photo.

I kind of do not like the stairway being blurred; it's a little visually confusing to have foreground and background blurred the same amount, when there isn't a huge amount of stuff to focus on in the middle of the image. When I make the image fullscreen. it hurts my eyes a little because of the front and back blur. Perhaps, instead of blurring the staircase railing, desaturate the blue so that it is not so prominent. In the background of the image, the far background of the sound barrier, it's a bit too blue. It looks altered, because there is no source of light that could make that wall look that tint. Maybe applying a tint or photo filter to just that section of the photograph (over the building and tree as well, because they have an unnatural look that doesn't quite match the rest of the image) would do the trick. Without that, it looks like two different pictures (color wise)

Digital Darkroom

This is how I chose to present my Digital Darkroom. Here you go!

Hint: you can hit the play button and it takes you through the path I drew. You can also click around to zoom in on different pictures to view them closer up! (also you should full-screen)

Digital Darkroom on Prezi

If the embedded version does not work, here is the link.
Digital Darkroom: 5 images and how they were edited



Here they are side-by-side for easier (but admittedly less fun) comparison. I would advise clicking on the images to view them larger.